Comprehensive script and story feedback on a full screenplay draft.
description:
General feedback on story, style and format plus detailed feedback on individual scenes in your script. This is discussed during a telephone or Skype consultation of up to two hours, during which you will get recommendations for the next draft or a development strategy to final draft.
The session includes an optional audio recording which you can download or play as an mp3.
objectives:
- to ensure the story delivers on the logline
- to check if your scenes contain plot points
- to visualise and externalise the character journey
- to bring clarity, concision and colour in the writing
- to improve dialogue on various levels (tone, style, grammar etc.)
- to check if your scenes contain plot points
- to visualise and externalise the character journey
- to bring clarity, concision and colour in the writing
- to improve dialogue on various levels (tone, style, grammar etc.)
turnaround(*):
- ten working days from receipt of screenplay and payment.
cost & payment:
- $550 for first session, $495 for each follow-up session.
- payable prior to commencement of the consultation.
- methods accepted: PayPal, Direct Transfer, Bank Cheque, Credit Card(**)
- part-refunded if in conjunction with an other service (within one month).
- payable prior to commencement of the consultation.
- methods accepted: PayPal, Direct Transfer, Bank Cheque, Credit Card(**)
- part-refunded if in conjunction with an other service (within one month).
(*) Estimated, based on past experience.
(**) Processing fee may apply.
“It’s like finding the secret recipe. Something not only scriptwriters should know but anyone involved in the movie making process. And it excited me enough to actually get a story down on paper.” -Paul Clarke
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