Comprehensive script and story feedback on a script of up to 15 pages.

description:

General comments on story, style and format plus detailed comments on individual scenes in your script(*). These are discussed during a telephone consultation of one hour. The phone session includes an optional audio recording which you can download or play as an mp3. Upon request, you will get recommendations for the next draft or a development strategy to final draft / production.

objectives:

- to make sure the story delivers on the logline
- to check if your scenes contain plot points
- to visualise, externalise the character journey
- to bring clarity, concision and colour in the writing
- to improve dialogue where necessary

turnaround(**):

- five working days from receipt of screenplay and payment.

payment:

- full payment upon booking of the consultation.
- methods accepted: PayPal, Direct Transfer, Bank Cheque, Credit Card(***)
- part-refunded if in conjunction with an other service (within one month).
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(*)The advertised rate applies for scripts up to 15pp., a surplus of $5 (GST Incl.) for each page thereafter.
(**) Estimated, based on past experience. Please inquire if you’re on a deadline.
(***) Processing fee of 2% may apply.