<?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?><rss version="2.0"
	xmlns:content="http://purl.org/rss/1.0/modules/content/"
	xmlns:dc="http://purl.org/dc/elements/1.1/"
	xmlns:atom="http://www.w3.org/2005/Atom"
	xmlns:sy="http://purl.org/rss/1.0/modules/syndication/"
		>
<channel>
	<title>Comments on: Mystery Man vs. Sherlock Holmes: 1-0</title>
	<atom:link href="http://thestorydepartment.com/ive-shown-my-cards/feed/" rel="self" type="application/rss+xml" />
	<link>http://thestorydepartment.com/ive-shown-my-cards/</link>
	<description>Screenwriting - from Dream to Draft to Deal</description>
	<lastBuildDate>Fri, 27 Jan 2012 01:55:00 +0000</lastBuildDate>
	<sy:updatePeriod>hourly</sy:updatePeriod>
	<sy:updateFrequency>1</sy:updateFrequency>
	<generator>http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1</generator>
	<item>
		<title>By: Rod</title>
		<link>http://thestorydepartment.com/ive-shown-my-cards/#comment-7165</link>
		<dc:creator>Rod</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 25 Nov 2011 14:09:12 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid isPermaLink="false">http://thestorydepartment.com/tsd/?p=8135#comment-7165</guid>
		<description>I hear you about getting away  from formulaic writing BUT
it is easier said than done.  It also calls for a mastery of storytelling that few writers have.
When unskilled or thinly skilled writers try this, we end up with movies especially
With no story or stupid endings or endings that just stop and the audience says WTF?

Breaking the formulaic cycle is useless unless there is a story
Left when the smoke clears.

Good post - keep up the good work!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I hear you about getting away  from formulaic writing BUT<br />
it is easier said than done.  It also calls for a mastery of storytelling that few writers have.<br />
When unskilled or thinly skilled writers try this, we end up with movies especially<br />
With no story or stupid endings or endings that just stop and the audience says WTF?</p>
<p>Breaking the formulaic cycle is useless unless there is a story<br />
Left when the smoke clears.</p>
<p>Good post &#8211; keep up the good work!</p>
]]></content:encoded>
	</item>
</channel>
</rss>

