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	<title>Comments on: Structure: The Untouchables</title>
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	<description>Screenwriting - from Dream to Draft to Deal</description>
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		<title>By: Spoiler: Modern Warfare 3&#8242;s &#8216;No Russian&#8217; Moment? &#124; Kotaku Australia</title>
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		<dc:creator>Spoiler: Modern Warfare 3&#8242;s &#8216;No Russian&#8217; Moment? &#124; Kotaku Australia</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 04 Nov 2011 21:07:59 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] as unsettling and horrible as it is, we&#8217;ve become increasingly used to seeing scenes like that one from 1987&#8242;s The Untouchables which showed a little girl being killed by an explosion, that [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] as unsettling and horrible as it is, we&#8217;ve become increasingly used to seeing scenes like that one from 1987&#8242;s The Untouchables which showed a little girl being killed by an explosion, that [...]</p>
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		<title>By: Karel Segers</title>
		<link>http://thestorydepartment.com/structure-the-untouchables/#comment-4171</link>
		<dc:creator>Karel Segers</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 25 Aug 2010 00:03:48 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Here&#039;s your answer:

http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index?qid=20080718022833AA8MiZY

Fabulous piece... Enjoy!

Karel</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Here&#8217;s your answer:</p>
<p><a href="http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index?qid=20080718022833AA8MiZY" rel="nofollow">http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index?qid=20080718022833AA8MiZY</a></p>
<p>Fabulous piece&#8230; Enjoy!</p>
<p>Karel</p>
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		<title>By: Struzzi</title>
		<link>http://thestorydepartment.com/structure-the-untouchables/#comment-4170</link>
		<dc:creator>Struzzi</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 24 Aug 2010 23:28:51 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>If someone knows the title of song of the Opera&#039;s sequence please tell me !</description>
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		<title>By: Struzzi</title>
		<link>http://thestorydepartment.com/structure-the-untouchables/#comment-4169</link>
		<dc:creator>Struzzi</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 24 Aug 2010 23:27:42 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Si quelqu&#039;un connait le titre de la pièce devant laquelle Capone pleure à l&#039;opéra, ça m&#039;intéresse énormément ! :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Si quelqu&#8217;un connait le titre de la pièce devant laquelle Capone pleure à l&#8217;opéra, ça m&#8217;intéresse énormément ! :)</p>
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		<title>By: Angelo</title>
		<link>http://thestorydepartment.com/structure-the-untouchables/#comment-2107</link>
		<dc:creator>Angelo</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 05 Nov 2009 00:20:37 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Isn&#039;t that what makes Ness an adolescent -- his naivete?</description>
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		<title>By: storydude</title>
		<link>http://thestorydepartment.com/structure-the-untouchables/#comment-2096</link>
		<dc:creator>storydude</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 03 Nov 2009 01:48:35 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Isn&#039;t THJ about metaphors? Does it always literally have to be an adolescent and adventure?

The Hero is often a flawed adult, who needs to grow or transform. The journey is sometimes not at all adventurous, but dark and menacing.

In his book MYTH AND THE MOVIES, Stuart Voytilla shows how the journey works with a variety of genres and characters.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Isn&#8217;t THJ about metaphors? Does it always literally have to be an adolescent and adventure?</p>
<p>The Hero is often a flawed adult, who needs to grow or transform. The journey is sometimes not at all adventurous, but dark and menacing.</p>
<p>In his book MYTH AND THE MOVIES, Stuart Voytilla shows how the journey works with a variety of genres and characters.</p>
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		<title>By: D. Jason Fleming</title>
		<link>http://thestorydepartment.com/structure-the-untouchables/#comment-2095</link>
		<dc:creator>D. Jason Fleming</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 02 Nov 2009 23:27:22 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Though &lt;cite&gt;The Untouchables&lt;/cite&gt; is a damn well-structured story, I don&#039;t think using Campbellian hero&#039;s journey terminology is quite right.  

Elliot Ness isn&#039;t an adolescent going on an adventure, he&#039;s an adult (admittedly naive, at first, but still an adult) with a job to do.  

The thematic question is whether he will allow his virtues to be used to hamstring him and defeat his larger purpose.  (&quot;How far are you willing to go?&quot; &quot;As far as the law allows.&quot; &quot;All right, and THEN how far?&quot;)

Which makes the first raid scene and his meeting with Malone in the church equal halves of the inciting incident, I think.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Though <cite>The Untouchables</cite> is a damn well-structured story, I don&#8217;t think using Campbellian hero&#8217;s journey terminology is quite right.  </p>
<p>Elliot Ness isn&#8217;t an adolescent going on an adventure, he&#8217;s an adult (admittedly naive, at first, but still an adult) with a job to do.  </p>
<p>The thematic question is whether he will allow his virtues to be used to hamstring him and defeat his larger purpose.  (&#8220;How far are you willing to go?&#8221; &#8220;As far as the law allows.&#8221; &#8220;All right, and THEN how far?&#8221;)</p>
<p>Which makes the first raid scene and his meeting with Malone in the church equal halves of the inciting incident, I think.</p>
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