Your own private 3 day VIP script workshop.[/box]
Karel Segers is the king of story structure
and the service he provides is exceptional.
After an intensive three days in “The Cave” with Karel
and following a rewrite, my project has now
been optioned by a leading producer.
Winner Bill Warnock Award
AWG Award Nominee
The resulting screenplay is reviewed and you receive notes for a rewrite or polish during a 2-hour follow-up phone clinic.
This is a cost-effective and more rigorous alternative to a Full Script Edit, for which competitors charge around $5,000 or more and which can take 6-12 months to complete.
As an option (*) you’ll have access to a private web page containing updated copies of any relevant development documents.[/box]
steps towards completion: [box]
– You submit a screenplay or step outline (at least 4 pages).
– I review the material and prepare the workshop (10-15 working days)
– Intensive face-to-face story clinic: the Cave Workshop (3 days)
– You rewrite the screenplay or the outline (6-8 weeks)
– I review the script or outline and give you notes (10-15 working days)
– You write a final draft (6-8 weeks[/box]
schedule of the workshop: [box]
DAY ONE – Protagonist, point of view, key turning points, 3-act timeline, inner & outer journeys.
DAY TWO – Main plot sequences, 1st draft step outline, theme, building the ‘Story Grid’.
DAY THREE – Logline, subplots, supporting characters, final step outline.[/box]
turnaround(**):[box] – start: three weeks from receipt of materials and first payment installment.
– completion: ten working days after delivery of the resulting next draft.
Total duration: 18-21 weeks[/box]
payment:[box] – four equal installments, first one payable upon booking.
– methods accepted: PayPal, Bank Transfer, Cheque, Credit Card(***)[/box]
“The Cave” was really great. It showed me
a new way of looking at scriptwriting,
it gave me back the gusto I lost some time ago
and I got a big step closer to my goal of
creating an exceptional movie/thriller.
-Johanna Oppliger, Screenwriter
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(*) Ask about details.
(**) Estimated, based on past experience.
(***) Processing fee may apply.